Mike Peterson, Ph.D.

Utah Tech University

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Most academic writing depends on claims, warrants, and evidence, so the more you know about how they function together, the better you’ll be at not only writing persuasive papers, but picking apart other-people’s arguments.

 

What is a Claim?

I had a teacher once give me an interesting piece of advice: Never start a paragraph with a fact. Always start with a claim. Since she was in charge of my grade, I obeyed. I was also willing to try it because she promised it would make my writing more compelling. It proved a bit problematic with introductions and conclusions, but I found that when writing “body” paragraphs, starting with a claim was no more difficult than starting with a fact. She might have explained this, but it didn’t sink in until later, but what she was asking me to do was to start each paragraph with a topic sentence. I applied her rule for most of my college career, but by the time I graduated, I realized that while it was a convenient little trick, it wasn’t necessarily the wisest choice in every writing situation. I found, for example, that I prefer to write short paragraphs. Rather than containing my ideas into stand-alone paragraphs with a topic sentence and all the necessary evidence and details, I tend to cluster my ideas into groups of small paragraphs. Starting each of these little paragraphs with a claim doesn’t work quite the same as when you’re writing a “five-paragraph theme” essay.

A claim is simply a debatable statement based on the interpretation of evidence, but not a mere statement of fact.

Example of a Statement of Fact:

According to the 2011 NOAA Index, August is the hottest month of the year in southern Utah.

This isn’t a particularly interesting piece of information. I can see why my old professor would roll her eyes if I started a paragraph with it. But it is a great piece of evidence. The NOAA Index is indisputable, so if I needed some proof that August is hot, there you go.

Example of a Claim:

Despite it being the hottest month of the year, August is actually a great time to begin training for a marathon.

If you write something, and you can anticipate someone asking what you are basing that on, then chances are you’ve just written a claim. Bravo. I don’t run marathons, but I have many friends who do. If I said that August is the best time to begin training, no doubt some would guffaw and tell me I’m wrong, while others would say, “Now hold on—he might be onto something.” That’s the beauty of a claim. It gets the reader thinking. It causes them to think of whether they agree or disagree, and it leaves them wanting to know on what you are basing your claim.

The two key types of claims you will make in writing are thesis statements and topic sentences. A thesis statement is the central claim you make in your paper. It’s your main argument. Everything in the paper should be in service of supporting your thesis statement. It is usually found in the first paragraph (or in the introductory material, which might be the first few paragraphs) and is often repeated in the conclusion (but not always; that’s a stylistic choice).

A topic sentence is similar to a thesis statement, but it is the main claim of a specific paragraph or section. As I’ve mentioned, it is usually found in the first sentence or two of a paragraph, but not always.

If you find it useful, here are a few more example of claims and mere statements of fact: